The sun was in my eyes.
And then a creature approached me,
and to my surprise,
I saw a little bird thing,
pecking at the ground.
It pulled up little worms and squirming beetles to.
Then it looked up at me as if asking "What are you?".
I named it Little Kiwi and we became the best of friends.
I named it Little Kiwi and that's where this story ends.
Little Kiwi. I want to hold one of these amazing little creatures. The way that you weave together a scene through a few, poetic lines is inspiring. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteLittle Kiwi. I want to hold one of these amazing little creatures. The way that you weave together a scene through a few, poetic lines is inspiring. Thank you for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThat's really cool Ahna! I love the part where you say "And then a creature approached me,and to my surprise,I saw a little bird thing,pecking at the ground."
ReplyDeleteHave you ever been to New Zealand, not like I have been there, but considering you made an awesome poem about kiwis I would assume you would like it there.
ReplyDeleteSoooo cute! I love the image I get, and the image you posted for us, and like the whole thing. I LOVE THIS SO MUCH!
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